Writing a focused paragraph
Build one clear point with supporting detail and explanation.
Before you begin
- Complete sentences
- Recognising a main idea
Give the paragraph one job
A focused paragraph develops one main idea. A topic sentence can name that idea, while the following sentences explain or illustrate it. Before writing, decide what you want the reader to understand. A detail belongs when it helps that purpose; an interesting but unrelated fact can weaken the paragraph's direction.
Explain how the example supports the point
A useful sequence is point, example and explanation, although effective writing can vary the order. Make the connection explicit rather than expecting the reader to supply it. A final sentence may draw together the idea or connect to the next paragraph. It should do more than repeat the first sentence word for word.
Worked example
Develop the point 'A class reading corner can encourage independent reading.'
Show the worked solution
- State the point clearly.
- Add a concrete example: students can choose a short book during free time.
- Explain that convenient access and choice make reading easier to begin.
A reading corner can encourage independent reading. When a short book is within reach, students can use a free ten minutes to explore it. Easy access turns a spare moment into a chance to read.
Try it yourself
Which detail best supports a paragraph about making a reading corner inviting?
Common mistakes
- More details do not help if they pull the paragraph away from its main point.
What can you explain now?
Write a three-sentence paragraph explaining one benefit of planning homework time.
Compare with the explanation
One possible focus: planning gives each task an available time slot.
Check that the first sentence makes one point, the second gives a concrete example and the third explains the benefit. Several valid paragraphs are possible; compare the reasoning, not identical wording.
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Common Core English language arts standards ↗